Interesting how your series has calmed down, Raven. The handwriting is more normalized and legible, and what's going on seems clearer. Almost the reverse of the traditional ramp-up - or are we going back up again in the next few installments?
I just realized from the comments that this is a series...silly me. I'm very intrigued by the hand-written story. You do get a lot more feeling with how you do that!
This was cool before as a stand alone, but with the context of the others, this is fucking fantastic.
A lot of experimentation goes horribly wrong, but this works really well. Here we are in the digital age with our digital type, e-mails, and word docs, and you have taken us back to where you don't need an emoticon to indicate feeling.
I'd love to see some short stores that are hand-written with drawing in the margins, perhaps even the little drop of blood now and then.
A-ha! The reveal! This installment pulls the other ones into focus and now there's a sense of a "bigger picture" rather than merely a hint. Would love to see where this goes.
Interesting how your series has calmed down, Raven. The handwriting is more normalized and legible, and what's going on seems clearer. Almost the reverse of the traditional ramp-up - or are we going back up again in the next few installments?
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the single blood spot. This is really fun!
ReplyDeleteI just realized from the comments that this is a series...silly me. I'm very intrigued by the hand-written story. You do get a lot more feeling with how you do that!
ReplyDeleteThis was cool before as a stand alone, but with the context of the others, this is fucking fantastic.
ReplyDeleteA lot of experimentation goes horribly wrong, but this works really well. Here we are in the digital age with our digital type, e-mails, and word docs, and you have taken us back to where you don't need an emoticon to indicate feeling.
I'd love to see some short stores that are hand-written with drawing in the margins, perhaps even the little drop of blood now and then.
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(That was an emoticon to tell you I liked this)
A-ha! The reveal! This installment pulls the other ones into focus and now there's a sense of a "bigger picture" rather than merely a hint. Would love to see where this goes.
ReplyDeleteI just read through all five entries. I love this experiment in writing. Fantastic job. Can't wait to see what the final entry will be.
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